Formal letter

Dear Madam,
We are well in the highschool because we consider that there is a very good organization and very good teachers, but also, there are things that we don’t like, for this reason we are writing you, for tell you what we dislike.
First, we are going to talk about the secondary door. We think if there is a door in front of “Punt de Trobada”, in the break time we could use it for going out and go at the bar. If we can go out for this door we will have more time for eating.
Secondly, we complain about the technology of the centre. We think there isn’t a lot of this. Technology is the future of our society and it’s very good for learning. We ask for more computers and more beamers although we know it’s very difficult because it’s very expensive and there are a lot of schools, but we would try this.
Finally, we want ask for more excursions and final school trips. For us, excursions are a good method for learn because they are a practical class and the students enjoy and want learn more. The final school trip is another thing that we want ask for, because we think we have a lot of work during the course and we deserve a little trip with classmates and teachers at the end.

These three things are our dislikes. As you can see, we think the rest of things are well.